You want to write unforgettable, page-turning fiction. I can help.
Outline Review
Review of your draft outline in its current format. Plus, a detailed story survey to make sure the outline matches your intentions and will delight readers in your genre.
Fiction Ignition: Collaborative Outline Builder
Build your outline with an editor. Perfect for writers exploring a new genre, planning a series, or outlining your first novel. For writers of any skill level and stories of any length.
Story Coaching
Ongoing support for existing clients to turn an outline into a story.
Must work with me through another service first.
Manuscript Review
Transform a professional draft into an unputdownable novel. For experienced authors.
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Schedule a free call to see what we can accomplish together.
Praise from past clients
“Lori is brilliant and a pleasure to work with. I wish I'd hired her years ago.” - Noelle, mystery
“Working with Lori has helped me write so much sharper and more compelling. I have improved more working with her than I did through years of writing copy or taking creative writing classes in undergrad. ” - Bridgette, fantasy
“Lori has helped me take my writing from okay to awesome. I’ve learned how to build the creepy factor, as well as the scares and the suspense. ” - Sara, thriller
“Working with Lori has definitely put me on the right track to becoming a better writer.” - Yussif, thriller
“Our calls are the highlight of my week. I truly appreciate Lori’s support and encouragement. Lori has given me hope that my dream of getting [traditionally] published and writing full time actually may come true.” - Catherine, romance
“I was scared my book wouldn't be interesting enough for people to keep reading beyond the first ten pages. Now I feel like I'm heading in the right direction and with a few tweaks, my book will be the story I want it to be.” - Michelle, thriller
“If you have twenty years to waste on 'trial and error', go for it. If not, call Lori.” - Sandra, fantasy