Ask Lori to speak to (or write for) your group!

Lori loves opportunities to speak to fiction writers through activities such as webinars, podcast interviews, guest blogging, being a virtual summit panelist, or speaking to writing critique groups.

She particularly loves talking to novelists who are in the messy middle of a manuscript and writers working to upgrade their writing skills in a genre she edits (fantasy & science fiction, romance, and crime). 

A member of the inaugural class of Story Grid certified editors, Lori has used her background in scientific research (Girl’s got a PhD!) and as a data analyst (She made numbers tell stories!) to find the places where the standard advice given to writers, falls short.

Tired of watching her clients struggle, Lori has developed her own unique approach to editing. You can see her method in action on her blog, where she gives authors feedback on their works-in-progress and shares advice on how to overcome the challenges novelists face mid-project.

Previously, Lori has been a presenter at ProWritingAid's Crime Writers' Week, as well as a guest on writing podcasts such as The Creative Writer’s Toolbelt, The Writescast Network, and Writership. She was a panelist at The Writer’s Craft Summit in 2019. She also co-coordinated a 2023 novel planning clinic on Scribophile with author Christopher Sunami, and returned as a guest editor in 2024.


Some Topics Lori enjoys discussing

  • Four topics writing craft books rarely cover, but should

  • The most frequent reason novels get abandoned mid-draft or thrown in a drawer and never published

  • One character change most writers don’t make that can vastly improve their novel (Hint: it’s not your hero.)

  • Turbocharge your ability to get readers to *consistently* turn pages by mastering this one, often misunderstood concept.

Contact Lori for Inquiries

Message lori {at} loripuma {dot} com.


Past Interviews

The Writescast Network

Keeping a Reader’s Attention featuring Lori Puma – Writescast 068

The Creative Writer's Toolbelt

In this episode, Andy Chamberlain and Lori Puma talk about why stories matter, and what writers should do about that. They discuss the way a developmental editor can actually help authors, and reflect on the way in which personal tragedy can inform both our lives and our stories.

The Writership Podcast

In this episode, editors Leslie Watts and Lori Puma critique “Night Fishing,” a coming of age short story by Kevin Glasgow. They discuss how to take your story from pretty good to WOW.

 

Testimonials

 
TL Dyer @tldyerauthor tweets a reply "Loved your session, Lori. Really useful & thoroughly entertaining. I'm using my notes on your tips as I edit each scene of my WIP. Feels like I'm actually 'crafting' this book not just going on instinct & hope

Guest Blog Posts

How to Practice Storytelling:2 Essential Skills

In Malcolm Gladwell’s book Outliers, he proposes that it takes 10,000 hours of practice to master a skill. If the skill you want to master is writing, what exactly should you do in those 10,000 hours? This post defines the two types of storytelling skills that writers need to practice and shares how to practice and improve in both.

The Story Grid Translated Into Common Writing Terms

The Story Grid is an editing method for crafting page-turning fiction. This post is a primer on how the Story Grid matches up with 11 concepts and terms that many writers already know.